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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
In the Marchmadness A Dark Stranger accompanied by a secondhanddreampoet gives a BluesSerenade down by the SEA to a a woman who is freeand2sexy for his song. She shuns that Balladeer who offered ThisDiamond on his knees. She knows they're just passing shadows like the Windhover of Artic Wind that spills over A Romantic Heart, where lots of nakdthoughts and too many Margherita in the Midnitesun could cause you to get your SeraphimBroken by 1slick_lady. And as that unboundpoetess walks alone on the beach eating Juju beans and wishing Robert E. Jordan hadn't taken her CrazyHorse. She sees Alison riding her bike across the moon like a WindWalker or an Earth Angel on a Pilgrimage. She giggles and thinks that Local Rebel must be taking ethome. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Critical mass, You forgot me. That's okay, it's habit forming. Bobby |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Bobby There I fixed it. Hard to get everyone into one poem. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
*giggles and grins* Bobby, get off my horse, man. Heather  |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
chuckling (especially at that last line) and how serendipitous, because I was just thinking that I loved YOUR pen name! very cute and creative stuff! and LR is taking ethome, eh? *laughing* Not without a fight, I'd venture.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CM...way cool!! a pleasurmonic concoction |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Critical mass, Thanks for including me. I always did have taking ways. Bobby |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Enjoyed |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
cleverly and nicely done...enjoyed |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
unboundpoetess serenity blaze Dark Stranger Robert E. Jordan ThisDiamond steavenr Glad you all enjoyed this. It was fun doing this. Thanks for the replies. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
LOL.... very clever! *S* I enjoyed! *S* |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
suthern Thanks for commenting much appreciated. DM |
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