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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-04-13 12:08 PM


Take a trip to a private destination
A journey to selfish exploration
Where there is nothing but time
Frozen in your Epicurean state of mind
To please only yourself in this way
There is nothing else that exists in this place
Immersed in anything that you choose
Regain the you that you always seem to lose
Feast upon a sensory Dionysian overload
Your safe haven of which nobody knows
Relish each and every delicious flavor
All the pleasures one by one savored
Leave if you must, to your earthbound cares
And return to your secret world that is always there


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1 posted 2009-04-13 12:26 PM


I do need to create a safe haven for myself, it sure would be nice to leave where I am now

beautiful poem!

Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-04-13 12:28 PM


Thank you, but I am sorry to hear you say that PS.
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3 posted 2009-04-13 12:54 PM


Immersed in anything that you choose
Regain the you that you always seem to lose

What a beautiful reminder that such a place exists... it's easy to forget in a frenzied world.

I love this!!! *S*

Chalmette Guy
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4 posted 2009-04-13 12:59 PM


Thank you Suthern. I prefer to live in that world, rather in this one. Well, I try.
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5 posted 2009-04-13 02:42 PM


LOL... I have to admit I greatly prefer that safe haven... and once there, don't want to leave! *S*
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