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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-04-13 07:44 AM



I guess we were almost strangers again
or at least it seemed so
according to the black cat on the corner
of the bar that ignored your hamburger

and the younger man across from you
that pretended not to notice
how your breasts were exceptional
and your smile was too when you noticed

I wrote you emails from next to you
and you replied with blushes and glances
what if your boy friend noticed
and would I fight him for your time

you hoped not because guns frighten you
and you didn't want it to end that way
without him at least catching us
completely in the act for a few hours

so he would know what you have been missing

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suthern
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since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
1 posted 2009-04-13 12:45 PM


and you didn't want it to end that way
without him at least catching us
completely in the act for a few hours

so he would know what you have been missing

Oh, wow! *S* I got caught up in the whimsy of emailing and watching the response... wasn't prepared for the cannon versus pellet gun ending! *S* Love this!!!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
2 posted 2009-04-13 01:45 PM


ms suthern..thanks lady friend..it is quite the place to hang out,,old road 33 up over the mountains..
Indigo
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since 2001-05-17
Posts 602

3 posted 2009-04-13 06:31 PM


poor smith & wesson
the caliber of her smile
left them wanting more.

Indigo

Osprey
Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249

4 posted 2009-04-13 07:44 PM


Nicely arrogant, in a well- written way. Like your style. It's original and refreshing.
Dark Stranger
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since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631
West Coast
5 posted 2009-04-14 06:16 AM


ms indi...thanks babe...smiths and colts do balance our the power..

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osprey..humble thanks

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