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LindsayP
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0 posted 2009-04-12 10:37 PM




          A Trip to the Dentist


A rather wimpish young fellow had a severe toothache
And went along to the dentist to have it pulled out,
The dentist was friendly and bade him to sit up in the chair
And said ‘I’ll soon be able to see what your trouble’s about.’

Peering into his mouth he told Jim he could see the offender
And so you won’t feel any pain I’ll give you an injection,
The young fellow was aghast and said ‘I’m terrified of needles
And to let you do that has my adamant rejection’

‘Well don’t worry then’ said the dentist with compassion
‘There is another way that I can relieve you of pain,
I’ll give you some gas and you won’t feel a thing
And next time you have toothache you’ll come back again.’

The young fellow gave a groan and turned white as a ghost
And said ‘I had gas once before and I don’t want it again,
Gas is one thing that I most definitely cannot take
Isn’t there something else that will free me of pain.’

The dentist thought a moment and said ‘I could give you Viagara’
Jim said, ‘but will that stop the pain, please tell me the truth,’
The dentist responded by saying that it won’t stop the pain
‘But at least it’ll give you something to hang on to while I pull out your tooth’.

Lindsay

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1 posted 2009-04-12 10:40 PM


LMAO! Thanks for the laugh!
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2 posted 2009-04-12 11:39 PM


good grief that is hysterical!!

Robert E. Jordan
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3 posted 2009-04-12 11:56 PM


Yo LindsayP,

Poor Jim--it sounds like a kangaroo might be loose in the upper paddock.

Bobby

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4 posted 2009-04-13 12:24 PM


OMG! LOL That is so funny, love the ending Lindsay!


ARCTIC WIND

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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5 posted 2009-04-13 03:54 AM


LOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh Lindsay!! you really know how to make us laugh out loud!! this was a great write!!  Thanks so much for sharing the laughter with us here...

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2009-04-13 05:35 AM


Clever Dentist. Lol. Nice write Lindsay.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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7 posted 2009-04-13 07:13 AM


Lol very good
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8 posted 2009-04-13 12:39 PM


And to think... my dentist just offered me a stuffed animal to squeeze! LOL I was definitely gypped!!! LOL

Enjoyed this very much!! *S*

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9 posted 2009-04-13 01:06 PM


lol. I needed that on this monday morning! Good stuff!!! Perfectly done!
LindsayP
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10 posted 2009-04-13 09:00 PM



It gives me quite a buzz when I see the names of my good friends, Dixie, Susan,

Bobby, Michael, Roniece, Prasad, Dog, Ruth and K love taking the time to read and

comment on my poem. I can't thank you enough dear friends for your kind response.
I'm glad you all had a laugh. I love you all

Lindsay

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