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0 posted 2009-04-11 10:42 PM



How is it that you see me as perfection?
Mirror gazing...flaws outnumber features by far.
I see not an angel, as you say I am,
But a demon damned...from Hell, even, barred.

I wonder at us sometimes.
We're polar opposites you and I.
Though I believe we love Love and in that each other,
More than Life, Liberty, or of the sort,anything else.

We are odd, you and I.
Neither one of us can understand the image the other holds.
Perfection seemingly untainted, regardless of what the world throws.
And time continues to mock us, neither slowing nor passing by.

I love you, don't you know?
Each day,each hour,each minute,each second that love continues to grow.
I fear I wouldn't survive were you to leave me.
And I know you wouldn't.

I don't know how you see me an angel,
When it's obvious it's you,
Forever you amaze me...my life, my heart, my soul...
Belong to you.

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serenity blaze
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1 posted 2009-04-11 10:49 PM


sweeeeeeeeet...

this line, in particular:

:And time continues to mock us, neither slowing nor passing by."

This has me nodding agreement at the paradox of time that crawls so swiftly by!

A love poem is difficult to write, and I think you succeed for the most part, and yanno? When it comes to love poems, I forgive cliche'.

Love makes people feel it real...everytime.

Enjoyed.


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2 posted 2009-04-12 09:12 AM


"I love you, don't you know?" ~ Well, it certainly is apparent to me, that you do!

A very touching love write!


EA

rad802
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3 posted 2009-04-12 09:26 AM


I like this.
Good work.
Please visit my wifes forum.
It would mean a lot to her.
Thanks http://bride.hyperboards.com/index.php

Rick Delmonico

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