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Open Poetry #44

In Rhythm And Rhyme

HopeS
Member Elite

since 2000-12-22

Posts 4596
Perth Western Australia

0 posted 2009-04-10 01:56 PM

In Rhythm And Rhyme

Our hearts in harmony
Anyplace anytime
A silvery moon smiles
Stars always shine

With pleasures flowing
Inner feelings glow
Our love affair in words
Heartbeats in tempo

Dancing with my muse
Our hearts combine
Waltzing to love songs
In rhythm and rhyme

Capturing the intimacy
Embracing blissfully
Here on a virtual stage
A loving duet are we

Hope©2009

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2009-04-10 05:22 PM

These poems of yours are always so well written and concise.
You really have a way with the economy of words and still get your point across so well.

I love the flow of this. it's just great.

Eric

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-04-13 10:11 AM

Dancing with my muse
Our hearts combine
Waltzing to love songs
In rhythm and rhyme

Beautiful presentation! The poem and picture blend perfectly. *S*

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

3 posted 2009-04-13 09:52 PM

Your rythym and rhyme are always top class

dear Hope and always a pleasure to read.
Love to you dear Lady.

Lindsay

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

4 posted 2009-04-13 09:56 PM

Yo dear HopeS,

This is a lovely picture and poem.

Love Bobby

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