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quarter songs & t-bomb gravy |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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maybe it was the widow's window of her eyes glass with tears that seemed to never dry or perhaps just my handy man adultery that she caught her pretty skirt on when crossing the parking lot to nowhere the timing was right for lovers to blend even though we wondered about the right words it seemed the fit of things was better for both and if some healing came out of it, well any cure for the ache is better then pain so we played our fistful of quarters songs that made us press our shadows into one and we tasted the residue of each other's smile wondering how it would be to keep them there always on the other one's face, or could we I remember she moaned with her eyes sometimes I could hear the sound over a salad at the bakery and she would say it was nothing really but I felt it too and wanted even more of her we took our time walking back to that parking lot looking for where we could just start all over again ________________ daark (wishbone whiskey) |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
just lovely Mr Daark...  RDBBe kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
there is too much of this that I like to quote just one part...  you rock D  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms r&b, thanks ms _______________ ms suesea, thanks babe |
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Indigo Senior Member
since 2001-05-17
Posts 602 |
palm treed parking lots where his words pulled like the tide; salty and endless. Indigo |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
God this reminds me of so many nights of stumbling around with someone and...tasting each other's smiles and such...you sir, are incredible. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms indi...can almost see you walking across the spaces with that grin of yours and a subtle.."good timing eh?" thanks babe ____________ CG, thanks amigo..you bless me with your reads |
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bel1e Senior Member
since 2006-07-24
Posts 1631 |
~just passing through~always nice to see a familiar landscape~~~ |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
What is wishbone whiskey? I love the sound of it. I read this and realize you're bad. I think it took you some time to train yourself but then it was like an avalanche. Can't help yourself, don't worry, I'm here to help you. Make sure you play all the chords in the same key and it will work out well for you. So having said all of that, how do you get adultery into the widow idea? Hey, I'm just curious. This I loved "I remember she moaned with her eyes sometimes" I've seen/heard that. You're a smart dude and I love to see you having this much fun. Take care Eric |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I can't pick a favorite part... I can only slip it into my library to enjoy again and again... and applaud as I do so. *S* Magnificent! |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
Eric..thanks guy, wishbone whiskey...well, there is an old style Harley frame called the wishbone style..long legged women are also called wishbones and the whiskey part I am sure have figured out by now... widow adultery? when a relationship dies it leaves a widow even though the paperwork and the church don't see it that way.. _________________ ms suthern..thanks babe...you are a blessnig to my humble pen.. |
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