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technicolor dreaming |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you 
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 immersed in Technicolor dreaming everything such a vivid hue but it all fades to grey when my vision is filled with you… your smile lights up my heart sets in motion, a million butterflies and I’ve never seen anything so beautiful as the color of your eyes. I’m helpless when you touch me I’ve never known an emotion could so deeply imbue my soul, saturated in the splendor that shines from the magnificence, that is you and it’s all I can do when waking to not allow my eyes to reveal just a moment in reflecting, collecting trying to hold inside all I really feel ~SEA~ |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear SEA, There you goes Hon, that's the ticket. Be assured, he feels the same way about you. Love Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I agree with Bobby's comment. I do love that ending. You have a knack for putting a unique twist into romance. Till next time a big hug for ya and may he do the same night after night for ya. Eric |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
A lovely romantic poem SEA. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY well written! I'm most glad to see so much fine Romanticism gracing the pages of this "P.I.P.-land" Spring. MUCH sustained applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
Don't hold it inside SEA...you might burst. lol Nice writing here. |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
Beautiful you, inside and out... |
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Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
I've said it before... and I'll say it again. It takes a female to write a REAL love poem. Beautifully done... as always, Milady. D. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Lucky is the Lady that can love like that!! Your just a softy inside, makes me feel all warm and cozy. Beautiful picture/poem compilation. Tracey. |
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varun Junior Member
since 2009-04-05
Posts 13Punjab,India |
Dear I really carried up with ur Words Well done.... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Your love poems are so warm, gentle, and sensuous. Sweet dreams!  Linda |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
thank you all for your wonderful replies  |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
SEA - written only as SEA can... BC |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
yeah, I remember feeling this way...maybe soon again one day |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
SEA - If you're gonna love someone, that's the way to do so they can love you back. Romance in each word. Love it. Namyh |
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Dog Junior Member
since 2009-04-09
Posts 48England |
Passionate about somebody me thinks lol... yeh i miss those feelings, anyway a good read and well written ! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I’ve never known an emotion could so deeply imbue my soul, saturated in the splendor that shines from the magnificence, that is you Beautiful, sensual... perfection. *S* |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
nice write  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
continuing applause for this 'penning' !! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Susan you have written a beautiful love poem here, a delight to read Love Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
definitely sounds like the words of someone in love...particularly loved this phrase: "saturated in the splendor that shines from the magnificence" also, loved your fading to gray comparison... |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I love when this happens. And hate waking up, when it does... A delectable description of some great REM.  Love ya, sweet pea.  |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
WOW you've penned a precious love poem, dear friend. Loved to read this gem. Theresia |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Now this is poetic goodness! ARCTIC WIND |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
To add to everyone’s words, lovely write indeed SEA. Beautiful picture too. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"everything such a vivid hue but it all fades to grey when my vision is filled with you…" These lines are such love. Really beautifully written, but the ultimate gift..a dream and vision.. Lovely work. |
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ken206573 Member
since 2008-10-14
Posts 487 |
I loooved your poem. It shows how much you really love that special someone. I really like the pic for the poem as well |
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