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Wordplay Junior Member
since 2009-04-07
Posts 13 |
I saw love grocery shopping the other day. It wouldn't even look at me. I knew it felt that it owed me an apology. It didn't. I wanted to thank Love. I just followed it around the store. It bought all the salt and lemons she could afford. I went and bought up all the knives. I couldn't let love hurt itself because of me. It made me sad to realize that sometimes love just gives up on itself. I bought sugar with my knives. For the rest of the afternoon Love and I sat on the curb cutting lemons and squezzing them with sugar and laughed as we threw salt over our shoulders making wishes. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
It made me sad to realize that sometimes love just gives up on itself. I bought sugar with my knives. For the rest of the afternoon Love and I sat on the curb cutting lemons and squezzing them with sugar and laughed as we threw salt over our shoulders making wishes. I love this! The whimsy just makes it more powerful... Wonderful write! *S* |
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Wordplay Junior Member
since 2009-04-07
Posts 13 |
Thank you very much. I am glad you enjoyed. |
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k_love_02 Junior Member
since 2008-07-07
Posts 24 |
I love the twist you have on this, very unique to me personally, and just a nice sweet suprise at the end, making it a great happy ending! Great job! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a uniquely, creative write! Very amusing! Loved the ending!  EA |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Wordplay Cute poem, nicely done. |
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