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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-04-09 08:05 AM

a revival of sorts - released
  a rush of freedom
  a whirl of wings' wind

skyward

a coronation of clouds
veiled once dormant blues
   the air fills,

     feathered

dust in the wind,
skirted amongst time
  turned
the flock struggles
  as if mislead

a season coming home

Susan Caldwell
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-12-27

Posts 8348
Florida

1 posted 2009-04-09 09:23 AM

loved the alliterations...I have a gooey spot for them..

always very nice to read you.

"too bad ignorance isn't painful"
~Unknown~

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

2 posted 2009-04-09 09:48 PM

amazing....truly

Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California

3 posted 2009-04-09 10:11 PM

Lovely poem. Inkedgoddess.
Ida

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2009-04-10 12:10 PM

Loved this! I get all excited when flocks of birds fly overhead on their return home in the spring!

You two du-et very well together! lol

Linda

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

5 posted 2009-04-10 12:17 PM

"a whirl of wings' wind"

What a great duet! Love the wing rush.

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

6 posted 2009-04-10 03:29 PM

In all the whirling and rush overhead
   don't forget to DUCK!! ....

  one never knows
  what bestows
  from Heaven's hand!

Once again, the honor to mingle muses with Mish does bring out some incredible verses!
  I am certain more shall follow, hard not too!

       Thank you everyone!

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

7 posted 2009-04-10 05:46 PM

That's a beautiful sight.
Well written.

Eric

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

8 posted 2009-04-11 12:32 PM

inkedgoddess - nice write from two...

BC

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2009-04-11 08:10 AM

thank you so much for stopping by
its a pleasure and treasure to write with Ctowen

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

10 posted 2009-04-11 08:29 AM

What a pleasure to read you both in harmony. Truly the best of each thrives in the best of both.

Loved the feeling of feathery veils lifting on the wings of spring migration.

Much Happiness to both

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