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Open Poetry #44

Off the beaten path

cgonzalez4711
New Member

since 2009-04-06

Posts 8

0 posted 2009-04-08 03:52 PM

WE HAVE RISEN AND FALLEN BUT WE SEEM TO FIND THE WILL TO GET BACK UP. LASHING OUT AND TRAVERSING ON THROUGH TAKING A BEATING OR TWO.

OUR PATHS NEVER TOOK THE SAME DIRECTION BUT WE SEEM TO ALWAYS MEET OFF THE BEATENPATH. RECONCILING OUR LOST DEVOTION TO EACH OTHER; CHERISHING IT FOR EVERYTHING THAT IT IS WORTH. RECAPTURING THE MOMENT THAT HAS PASSED AND MOMENT THAT IS SOON TO BE.

I TRULY MISS YOUR SOOTHING AND CALMING WORDS, YOUR WARM LOVE AND AFFECTION TOWARD ME. IN HOPES TO CAPTURE YOU IN THE SAME WAY.

IN ALL THE CHAOS AND MISFORTUNE'S THAT HAVE CROSSED IN OUR PATHS; AT LEAST WE CAN SHARE THIS MOMENT OF PEACE WITH EACH OTHER. AS WE FOCUS AND ESTABLISH OUR OWN PATHS, REMEMBER;
I WILL ALWAYS BE SITING ON THE BENCH OFF THE BEATEN PATH WAITING.

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

1 posted 2009-04-08 05:53 PM

Lovely poem! had a nice flow, maybe wouldn't of written it in all uppercase though,
"classed as shouting" but i did enjoy the concept of the poem
Well Penned
Annie

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