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OwlSA
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0 posted 2009-04-08 12:22 PM



IT WAS WRITTEN INTO THE FIRST STAR BIRTH
4 August 2001

You make my sky tremble
on the lip prints of a song ...
a wind song of forest whispers
and beguiling waters
that tell tales of long ago
and of the slow æons
of tear drop secrets
that formed and grew
in moss and fern and lichen
and painted you and me
in primordial destiny.

- Owl

© Copyright 2009 Diana van den Berg - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
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1 posted 2009-04-08 06:06 PM


Diana, what a precious gem this is!

Absolutely awesome. A keeper!

Love,
Margherita

Oklahoma Rose
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2 posted 2009-04-08 09:30 PM


Diane, I love the way ou write.
2islander2
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3 posted 2009-04-09 02:10 AM


Hi Owl, this is exquisite and beautifully written.
yann

inkedgoddess
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4 posted 2009-04-09 08:02 AM


there is a common thread that unites us all in your glorious words
Marchmadness
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5 posted 2009-04-09 11:25 PM


What beautiful thoughts, Diana.
                           Ida
                                    

OwlSA
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6 posted 2009-04-10 03:45 AM


Thank you, Margherita.  I am glad you felt it so well.

Thank you, Sue.  I am honoured by what you say.

Thank you, Yann for your beautiful comment.

Thanks, Michele, for seeing that.

Thanks, Ida.  I am glad you thought so.

Owl

Sunshine
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7 posted 2009-04-10 10:08 PM


a wind song of forest whispers
and beguiling waters
that tell tales of long ago

~*~

Ah, Camelot!


OwlSA
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8 posted 2009-04-11 03:04 AM


Thanks, Karilea.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Owl

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9 posted 2009-04-13 10:44 AM


You make my sky tremble
on the lip prints of a song ...
a wind song of forest whispers
and beguiling waters
that tell tales of long ago

To meet someone who literally changes our world is a blessing... even if it's one we can't keep within our grasp. *S* Beautiful work!!

poddarku
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india
10 posted 2009-04-13 11:00 AM


the lip prints of a song...
It is Classic you. A writing blessed with a spirit so high we can only bow before it.

clever talks delay friendship!

OwlSA
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11 posted 2009-04-13 02:28 PM


Thank you so much, Ruth.

Kushal, you honour me so greatly, in spite of your own excellence.  Thank you, my friend.

Owl

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