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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-04-07 09:45 AM



candy store indigo with cricket shoes
I loved the classy glass of your paper cup
gypsy nervous in your lady fingering
of my pockets for change wanting emptied

I hadn't noticed your recommendations
when you swished the denim flag wag
and almost fell from your bosom helpless
for my eye hands to assit the proper tease

you played in the water filled afternoon
until your hands were too cold to pray
so you let me cover them with sinful palms
and said I could only worship your belly chain

when the rest of your lady fabric was awry
___________

daark (wishbone whiskey)

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suthern
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1 posted 2009-04-07 12:35 PM


you played in the water filled afternoon
until your hands were too cold to pray
so you let me cover them with sinful palms

Who could resist such a title? *S* And then the lines you weave... beautiful work! *S*

Another series....  yippee! LOL

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-04-07 12:58 PM


ms suthern..thanks lady friend..
angellea
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3 posted 2009-04-07 10:39 PM


Superb write, Dark Stranger.

~Maranda

Dark Stranger
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4 posted 2009-04-08 06:29 AM


ms maranda...thanks so much ms
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5 posted 2009-04-22 01:40 AM


You mesmerize.

A

Dark Stranger
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6 posted 2009-04-22 07:49 AM


ms ali-san..thanks ms
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