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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2009-04-06 11:53 PM


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I Love You More

I said; “I love you”,
She said; “I love you more”,
And I thought,
How could she love me more?
Does she know how much I care about her?
Does she feel that warmth of security knowing I am hers?
And know I have nothing to worry about when we are apart?
Could she kind of melt when I kiss her?
Or get that little high, when I touch her?
The warmth I feel in her embrace?
Oh, and what it means to me when we make love,
How could someone love me that much?
Am I worth that kind of devotion?
What did I do to deserve this woman?
She told me; “We are in this together forever”,
I said; “I love you”,
She said; “I love you more”

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

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1 posted 2009-04-07 03:55 AM


wow.
your poem,,,,,it left me...

speechless.

   "omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

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2 posted 2009-04-07 09:05 AM


Part of love's magic is that, when we're lucky, we get more than we deserve. *S* Beautiful write! *S*
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3 posted 2009-04-07 09:06 AM


_Patch, Thank you so much, That is so complimentary,  It is appreciated.

If you get a chance, read my poem; "I said, I love you"  

Love always,  Tracey.

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4 posted 2009-04-07 09:10 AM


Suthern *,  I am the magician,  If you asked me how I got so lucky, I would have to say;
It's magic.

Thank you for your wonderful comments, and for always being a friend.

Love, Tracey.

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5 posted 2009-04-07 11:54 AM


this is such a romantic poem....so completely sweet!  very much enjoyed!!
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6 posted 2009-04-07 12:42 PM


Beautiful love and togetherness expressed


Hope

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7 posted 2009-04-07 02:25 PM


Suzy,  Thanks for your wonderful comments, I guess I am kind of a romantic, at heart.

Love is a forever thing,
Tracey

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8 posted 2009-04-07 02:27 PM


Hope,  If only I could write like you, I would be thrilled.
To have you enjoy my poetry is a wonderful compliment.

Thank you so much.
Tracey.

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9 posted 2009-04-07 04:51 PM


There is such a tender note that rings throughout this very beautiful poem, dear Tracey.

The sweet competition of who loves more ... ahh!

Love,
Margherita

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10 posted 2009-04-07 07:29 PM


Yo WTBAKELAR,

I don't think love is a more, or less thing.

It's either there or it isn't.

Bobby

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11 posted 2009-04-07 07:44 PM


WTBAKELAR - a true romantic for sure, nice writing...

BC

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12 posted 2009-04-07 08:42 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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13 posted 2009-04-08 09:26 AM


Margherita,  Bobby,
A very wise man told me, long ago;
Don't expect to get love, if you don't give love,
If you take it with out giving back, the giver will run out, and have nothing left.
That's when love ends.
When both give everything, it is a constant flow between the two, and forever stays fresh.

Thank you so much for your kind comments.
Love Tracey

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14 posted 2009-04-08 09:27 AM


Bill, James,
Thank you both for your sincere and kind comments,  Your thoughts are both very much appreciated.

Love, Tracey

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15 posted 2009-04-08 11:28 PM



You certainly have a way with words my friend, that is a beautiful heart touching

romantic poem, I read it and reread it and enjoyed both. Take care.

Lindsay

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16 posted 2009-04-09 12:30 PM


Very well written Sir
The emotions touched my heart

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17 posted 2009-04-09 05:17 PM


Thanks, Lindsay,  coming from you, The word master,  I appreciate your praise.

Sincerly, Your friend, Tracey.

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18 posted 2009-04-09 05:18 PM


varun,  thank you again for your kind comments,   I look forward to reading your works.

Tracey.

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19 posted 2009-04-10 12:21 PM


Totally charming ~ from beginning to end!

Only a loving, sweetie pie of a man, could have written this!


Linda

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