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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-04-05 05:08 PM




edge of Spring

fine wind-wing fliers
in graceful curves of pursuit...
the world reflected
with blossoms in the water
on this lovely edge of Spring

--- b. e. adams (4/5/2009)


          

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Margherita
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1 posted 2009-04-05 05:14 PM


Enjoyed this little gem, dear Bruce.

Love,
Margherita

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2 posted 2009-04-05 06:41 PM


A fine spring tanka.
critical mass
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3 posted 2009-04-05 08:41 PM


nicely done.
I usually don't like these but this flows really well.

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4 posted 2009-04-21 12:13 PM


I love to go back in time and find the little gems tucked among pages of blue.  'edge of spring' is like finding a pirate's treasure and I am happy.

A

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5 posted 2009-05-02 09:55 PM


Somehow this one slipped past me but I found it and it was worth searching for.
                                 Ida

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6 posted 2009-05-03 10:35 AM


Bruce, that is one stunning spring tanka!

~ and as Elvis used to say, "Tanka! Tanka very much!"

Sending a springy hug your way!

Linda

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