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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-04-05 04:32 PM




Gaze far into the soft, night sky; Come... dream a little dream with me:
up in the star-drenched, velvet darkness;
there, sweet cherished dreams are free
from common sense, and circumstance; those things that would such dreams, undo;
up there, amongst the moonlit Cloud Cathedrals, sweetest dreams come true.

Soft caressed, by whispering Moonwind, gently cradled in my heart,
safe forever... loved forever... this is where we, breathless, start
to weave together such a dream to make the very stars grow pale;
a shining dream of Love Eternal...
love we know can never fail.

Such a Love, we hope is somewhere out there; but so seldom find;
a gentle, tender, trusting Love... a Love that is completely blind
save, to itself...
a Love that asks no questions; needs no answering;
A Love that never sees our faults; it really is the sweetest thing.

To dance with You among the stars, our hearts entwined, our spirits free;
no creeping, chill caress of doubt, no shadows of uncertainty.
Here, is no hurt; here... no betrayal; here, there are no whispered lies;
for You are everything my heart desires...
so perfect, in my eyes.

Gaze far into the soft, night sky; Come... dream a little dream with me.
Imagination's soft caress... perhaps, of us, as we could be,
if I could magic words into reality... and dreams came true;
for there is no-one else at all,
with whom I'd share this dream...
but You.


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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2009-04-05 04:41 PM


I am particularly fond of the beginning:

"...Come ... dream with me:
  up in the star-drenched, velvet darkness;
  there, sweet cherished dreams are free
  from common sense, and circumstance;
  those things that would such dreams, undo;
  up there, amongst the moonlit Cloud Cathedrals..."

superb (Romantic) imagery !

MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !!

A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-04-06 02:59 AM


a Love that asks no questions; needs no answering;
A Love that never sees our faults; it really is the sweetest thing.

To dance with You among the stars, our hearts entwined, our spirits free;
no creeping, chill caress of doubt, no shadows of uncertainty.
Here, is no hurt; here... no betrayal; here, there are no whispered lies;
for You are everything my heart desires...
so perfect, in my eyes.


Are you reading my heart?

~ARH

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3 posted 2009-04-09 12:23 PM


I like this dream very much... and lucky is the lady so dreamed! *S*
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