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A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-04-04 05:47 PM


    


Lay awake with me tonight,
in whispers underneath the moon,
sharing souls, dreams take flight,
feeding my heart with poetic spoon,

breathe your breath upon my face,
a velvet misty vapor covering me,
you have brought me to this place,
your soft touch, my healing recovery,

The windows of my soul are open,
you have lit the candles aflame,
once this harden heart was broken,
you mend it when you whisper my name,

Tell me your darkest secrets,
share with me your dreams and mind,
as we move forward with no regrets,
no pause, or fast forward, not rewind,

hear the silence in the air,
so peaceful, just you and I,
as your fingers run through my hair,
you kiss the tears from my eyes,

This is our moment, our time,
melt me, mold me, shape my heart,
hold it precious, to steal is a crime,
promise to never break it apart,

Lay with me here tonight,
in the shadows of the moon,
wrap your arms around me tight,
For morning comes to soon...

    

© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Eloise
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since 1999-11-27
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Wyoming
1 posted 2009-04-04 05:59 PM


"feeding my heart with poetic spoon"

Once again "Beautiful"  Very well done.  Enjoyed this one also.
Eloise

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-04-04 06:03 PM


Thanks El~

Yes it is a great treat,
when being fed lines
of beautiful poetry
written just for you!

~ARh

Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
3 posted 2009-04-04 08:53 PM


Beautiful romantic imagery dear Heart.

In bliss the lovers lie entranced
And consumate gentle romance
With words spoken soft and low,
As gentle as the falling snow.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2009-04-04 09:52 PM


BEAUTIFUL WRITE ARH!!! ~ I loved this


ARCTIC WIND

suthern
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Louisiana
5 posted 2009-04-05 12:54 PM


Beautiful write! *S*
Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
6 posted 2009-04-05 01:43 PM


Ahhh . . . spring brings romance and no better mood to be in.  Wonderful from top to bottom.  
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2009-04-05 03:58 PM


Super pictures and beautiful write!

That girl in the lower picture should do alright financially because it's obvious her lover went to dental school.....LOL! Aw c'mon jus kiddin.

Eric

vandana
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8 posted 2009-04-05 05:27 PM


very nice
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