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Jaime Fradera
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Where no tyranny is tolerable

0 posted 2009-04-04 02:48 PM



I'm not going to be humored or flattered
in social situations
by somebody who thinks I need to talk,
like having to go to the bathroom and they'll take me.
Most of them, while perhaps well-meaning,
are just feigning interest
and beating the air with their words.
This one lady, on a heavy snow day,
wanted to know if I could feel the snow.
I should have told her that, okay, I could smell it.
But Steu, a fellow congregant,
did take the trouble without being prompted,
and remarked the other day that:
"Y're all over the internet."
And Deborah also looked me up
without even being prompted,
So perhaps all is not lost.

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2009-04-04 02:53 PM


Did you ask her if SHE could feel it?
Enjoyed that 'beating the air' line.

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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2 posted 2009-04-04 03:25 PM


There's no replacement for genuine interest.
You're all is not lost.

Take care and kick ass if you have to.

Eric

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-04-04 05:11 PM


Enjoyed reading!


ARCTIC WIND

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4 posted 2009-04-04 07:37 PM


I think some people are just insensitive and can't help it, Jamie.
                               Ida

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5 posted 2009-04-20 02:59 AM


Hey Jaime,

I have been missing our talks, my friend.  I had a dog (husky) with really pale blue eyes.  A lady tried to convince me she was blind.  It's like I wouldn't have known if she was?

Like I said - I am missing you.

A

Prasad Nataraj
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6 posted 2009-04-20 07:55 AM


It happens everywhere, with most of us. Very thoughtful.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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