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Under Veil |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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 Under Veil Remembering a time when the heart skipped a beat- intimate thoughts under veil of defeat. A challenge each day when keyed to a heart- romantic in dreams with "if onlys" to start. Raindrops still dancing showering the mind - with you-thoughts of then framed in yesterday's find. Flirting with time and a thirst for the new - from the window in tracing the aloneness of two. M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A wonderful memory 'veil' write. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
effectively emotive! "A challenge each day when keyed to a heart- romantic in dreams with "if onlys" to start." well 'penned' !! |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
I have been having a lot of those " If Only thoughts Hope |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a beautiful, pensive write! *S* I know those "if only"s so well... you've penned them perfectly. |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is wonderful Maureen! ~ I really liked this. Yes, those "if only"'s! ...  ARCTIC WIND |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Maureen This is very touching and sad. I have read your works for many years and have perceived the inner lonliness that has developed in your soul. I know you are strong and I think it's built on such loyalty that most can't imagine maintaining. Whatever the reason it creates a beauty in words like expressed this piece. It may not be the way you wanted to develop this writing but it's life isn't. Sometimes we can live together yet apart, with only the memories of the good times left. "Flirting with time and a thirst for the new -" This I hope you find, this you deserve. Take care Eric |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
nakdthoughts nicely done. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Maureen - you still write with a gift, lovely as ever... BC |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Maureen you have written this beautifully. I know just how you feel. I have alot of those memories. |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
Raindrops still dancing showering the mind - with you-thoughts of then framed in yesterday's find. liked that stanza best of all, just something about it. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you Kacy. It was pouring and I actually love rainy day rememberings. Bruce, I know it doesn't help to think about what ifs, but sometimes quiet moments allow those to come to mind. Thanks for the visit. Hope, sometimes the if onlys are what helps one get through the day. Suthern, thank you. Hoping these days are much smoother for you. AW...it's nice when those if onlys become "today's find". Thank you. E, I love rainy days, in fact my craft business was/is called "Rainy Days 'n Mondays". The loneliness will probably always be there now. The loss of what once was in marriage and my Father and sister and favorite Aunt's deaths make it hard to not feel lonely when they were the ones I spent most time with and could share feelings with. Thank you for your thoughtfulness and understanding of the situation in which I now live. "Sometimes we can live together yet apart, with only the memories of the good times left."...exactly. hugging you in friendship and understanding always~~ critical mass, Thank you. I appreciate you taking the time to respond. BC, as always, thank you. Sue, I guess many of us on here have memories that come alive every now and then. hugs and thanks. noah j, glad you stopped by and enjoyed a few of my thoughts. JamesM, thanks, always. M |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Dear Maureen that is quite a touching poem that was a delight to read. Love to you my friend. Lindsay |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Maureen, This is among my favorites of yours. Rainy days always touch me and bring on the memories and quiet times. Alison |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
LindsayP and Allison, thank you both for stopping to leave a comment. I appreciate it. M |
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