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Suncleaver
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since 2009-01-18
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Stafford England

0 posted 2009-04-03 09:15 PM



Photograph by Haleh Bryan


Glance of pale cold eyes
Shows the winter of your soul,
Frozen forever.

Tousand years are gone, armageddon hasn't come,
Only the cry of a child echoes in the dark.
Back won't go his time as the stars are passing by,
and

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Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-04-03 09:23 PM


Yo Suncleaver,

This is an excellent senryu, well named.  I like the picture too.  That's my girl.

Bobby

Marchmadness
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
2 posted 2009-04-03 09:29 PM


Now, that's a senryu. Gorgeous picture.
                                  Ida

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-04-04 04:24 PM


Oh, I liked this,
but it is not me,
I am warm, and loving,
glowing red inside. lol!

~You have been missed?

~ARH

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
4 posted 2009-04-05 06:09 PM


Ohh, but that's an enchanting winter!

Perfect!!

Love,
Margherita

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2009-04-05 09:30 PM


Beautifully Written! With a hidden story in the view of her eyes!


ARCTIC WIND

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