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OwlSA
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0 posted 2009-04-03 07:20 PM



MANY ANGELS
11 July 2001

Your voice in mine paints
beauty like skies unfolding
crimson heartbeat clouds.

Owl

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2009-04-03 07:23 PM


Enjoyed this Owl!


ARCTIC WIND

OwlSA
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2 posted 2009-04-03 07:24 PM


Thank you Arctic Wind.

Owl

ethome
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3 posted 2009-04-03 07:28 PM


Wonderful metaphoric illustration.
Well done OWL

Eric

OwlSA
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4 posted 2009-04-03 07:41 PM


Thank you Eric for your kind comments.

Owl

unboundpoetess
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5 posted 2009-04-03 08:46 PM


Owl, this is gorgeous.

Heather

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Gaia
6 posted 2009-04-03 09:04 PM


Diana, that is a beautiful cloud image!
angellea
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7 posted 2009-04-03 09:08 PM


This is delightful.

~Maranda

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-04-03 09:12 PM


Yo dear OwlSA,

I'm afraid I don't understand this at all.

It must be me, as many people seem to get it.

Love Bobby

JamesMichael
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9 posted 2009-04-04 12:36 PM


Enjoyed...James
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10 posted 2009-04-04 11:50 AM


What a beautiful image! *S*

(Kate's "helping" me type... any typos are hers. LOL)

OwlSA
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11 posted 2009-04-04 12:39 PM


Thank you, Heather.

Thank you, Kacy.  I am glad you saw it so clearly.  

Thank you, Maranda.  I am glad you found it so.

Thank you, James.

Sorry you didn’t get it, Bobby.
Thanks, Ruth . . . and Kate.  And there were no typos!

Owl

Mark Bohannan
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12 posted 2009-04-04 02:12 PM


What a beautiful 5-7-5.  The image it leaves is a pure delight.
OwlSA
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13 posted 2009-04-04 02:27 PM


Thank you, Mark.  I am glad that my haiku gave you so much pleasure.  Smiles.

Owl

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