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Across The Milky Way
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Across The Milky Way |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
The night skies open calling from afar. As I’m guided to the most brilliant star. On a white puffed cloud I journey away. I follow my star through the milky way. This mystical feeling I can’t erase. I’m now a dreamer in another place. From high above up in the sky I turn around and wave good-bye. The crashing waves are quite a sight The lighthouse beckons in the night. The bubbling brook with music flows. From crystal waters down below. Majestic mountains come into view While streaking across the skies of blue. Inside my heart I carry with me, All the visions that I choose to see. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
These are really pretty poetic word pictures. Stimulating images that inspire the reader. Eric |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
Exquisite imagery. |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
ethome and angellea - thank you for your kind words. Eloise |
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