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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana 
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silence peaceful and pleasant, a salve for the soul obliterates cares, leaves one feeling whole tension defuses, faith and hope increase lack of noise can allow troubles' surcease but atmosphere pregnant, angry words unsaid hang heavy, surrounding with sense of dread breath constricted from fearing what may be I'm cowering in lonely misery then my whole world tilts to never be the same for you finally speak... and say her name ~~~~ 3/05 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ruth..those lookback glasses are always the ones with the scratches, your tomorrow eyes are lovely without them, always end your glances with a tomorrow window? enjoyed this ms |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This touches the heart, dear Ruth. It has great impact. The silence is broken, but in that very moment a new panorama opens and will help you out of this pain. Love, Margherita  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is quite the turn about and I love the ending. Good writing! Eric |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Good one Ruth, enjoyed. Love Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
DS: Scratched view or not, I'm always looking back... if only to resurrect the chestnuts I've written? LOL Thank you so much, my friend. *S* Margherita: Thank you so much, dear lady... This is old and I'm fine... new panoramas did unfold. *S* ethome: You've just made my day. *S* For I actually rewrote the ending to be more upbeat... and hated it, so went back to the original moan. *S* Thank you very much! *S* Lindsay: I'm glad you did... thank you so much! *S* |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"my whole world tilts to never be the same for you finally speak... and say her name" Egads! I suppose "silence is golden" afterall!  That faux pas was detrimental to his happiness, as well!!! Love 'n a warm hug, Linda  |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, oh oh. A tilt, a tumble, a smash into pieces. It started out so fine, and it brought me down. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
EA: In comparison to a misnaming, it is indeed golden! LOL Thank you so much, dear friend. *S* Pilgrimage: I'm sorry I brought you down... thanks for reading! *S* |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
This one packs a whallop. Thank you for sharing it - a whallop is always good for dreamers like me. A |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
This veers from side to side like a drunken pony - but oh what a ride it takes me on. Always do more than is required of you George Patton |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
how you write me you should have a book out |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
The date says 3/05 You don't look pregnant in your photo guess you're OK now. Didn't expect the ending. I agree silence is golden. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Alison: But no matter how many bruises we accrue, we dream again... and will as long as we breathe. *S* Thank you so much, dear friend... I always love your comments! *S* Kethry: ROFLMAO @ drunken pony... if only I could put a RESPONSE into my library!! LOL I hope you enjoyed the ride, my friend... thank you for the grins! *S* PS: There's this little thing called lack of ambition... and that's the lack I'll ADMIT! LOL Thank you so much!! *S* critical mass: I don't have a clue how to answer that... so I'll just say... thank you for reading. *S* |
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