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Sad Is The Day Of Goodbye
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Sad Is The Day Of Goodbye |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace 
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Sad Is The Day Of Goodbye there is pain the kind of hurt no one feels but you we are our raw emotions salt seeping from our souls there is joy in knowing and anguish in our loss emptiness we can not fill void in the hands of absence forgive me for words contrite but your sorrow is my own I wish I could be with you now just to hold you and your heart "I'm so hard to handle |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
awwww  Nothing about your words are contrite.... |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
What a comforting poem - and I have had salt seeping from my soul many a time, I could have used a friend, or a poem such as this. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
A truly compassionate heart write. |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
I really understand this. The desire to comfort someone, and yet all you have are words to send. Beautiful and sad at the same time. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I've tried twice to send this to a friend, but the email function doesn't seem to be working... You've written the words so many hearts have felt... this is one of your best. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms slick..only you can say what your heart wrote..viva babe! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Goodbyes can be really so painful, even if in heart and soul we are close. Very beautifully rendered, dear Helen. Love, Margherita |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Helen - very compassionate write, you did it well... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"salt seeping from our souls" ~ Loved that line! "I wish I could be with you now just to hold you and your heart" ~ Your tender, compassionate heart is showing! Linda |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sad, yes  |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
that feeling that you have and wish you didnt but it keeps getting at you you wore it well |
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