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Dark Stranger
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0 posted 2009-04-01 11:57 AM



we wrote those stories in our minds
and exchanged them as screen plays
for each other to pretend to get into
as actors trying to get their parts right

yours were already, even from the beginning
but you had your doubts on partially
until I found their buttons and ruined them
so you couldn't ever wear them again

or anything else much, actually
because nothing would go with my mind
unless it was just you being you
and we said everything needed to match

the fabric of love's barest necessities


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1 posted 2009-04-01 02:01 PM


"because nothing would go with my mind
unless it was just you being you"



too true!

Dark Stranger
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2 posted 2009-04-02 06:29 AM


ms suesea...thanks babe
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3 posted 2009-04-02 07:09 PM


quote:
because nothing would go with my mind
unless it was just you being you
and we said everything needed to match

the fabric of love's barest necessities



In the essential we find true beauty and truth.

Sooooo lovely.

Love,
Margherita

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4 posted 2009-04-03 06:16 AM


thank you ms mar
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5 posted 2009-04-03 07:17 AM


yep........you had me at... "unless it was just you being you"
*sigh* always lovely to read you Mr Daark xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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6 posted 2009-04-03 10:15 AM


because nothing would go with my mind
unless it was just you being you
and we said everything needed to match

Twelve point perfection!! Beautiful write, my friend. *S*

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7 posted 2009-04-14 12:28 PM


D

Truth is - buttons are really over-rated anyway and the only real use they have is to be pushed.  God knows mine are easy enough to find and push away on.  You know I like this.  

A

Dark Stranger
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8 posted 2009-04-14 06:19 AM


ms r&b, thanks lady friend

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ms suthern, thanks for the smile and nod


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ms ali-san, you are the one that stole all of the buttons..thanks babe

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9 posted 2009-04-14 05:23 PM


I always have to choose my favorite lines when I read your works.  This was no exception.  Finally decided on this:

"the fabric of love's barest necessities" ...creatively clever

...good to read you again...stretches the mind

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10 posted 2009-04-15 06:08 AM


steavenr, thanks guy..have missed your comments
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