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Michael G
Senior Member
since 2000-06-25
Posts 579
Nashville

0 posted 2009-05-30 03:46 PM


This fascination starts,
slow strokes of blessings
compound my heart
weaken my soul
flush fears away
remove past anger
allowing short bursts
of joy to enter.
This love begins
another has fallen
long ago friends
past lovers cry
I care myself
for the wind commands
bringing you near
as you whisper, now.

© Copyright 2009 Michael G - All Rights Reserved
Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2009-05-31 09:42 AM


A little gem, really enjoyed it!

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549
By the Seaside
2 posted 2009-05-31 12:51 PM


This is a hopeful poem, indeed.
The past is what it is.

Nice~

Shadow Angel
Junior Member
since 2009-05-31
Posts 29
New Zealand
3 posted 2009-05-31 08:20 PM




~  Oooo...very nice, Michael...

I'm new here so this is the first I have read by you
but it won't be the last...a pleasure to read this poem, my friend, and that closing is dreamy...love it!

*hugs*

Sasha xx


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