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serenity blaze
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0 posted 2009-03-30 08:42 PM



She has my eyes, my spirit too.
She looks at me so scornfully
I would swear that she was me--

but I was raised respectfully;
otherwise I would not be

at all. And nor would she.

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2009-03-30 08:44 PM


Yes Karen, the teachings of adult! ~ This speaks to me deeply! Yes, some people are hard to understand!

Karen!
ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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2 posted 2009-03-30 09:48 PM


Ah yes, the mother/daughter thing ( I believe)can be so complicated and sometimes difficult. At least for a while.
                               Ida

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3 posted 2009-03-30 10:05 PM


I was famous for power struggles, and I hate to tell you - I always won.
Artic Wind
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4 posted 2009-03-30 10:13 PM


LOL Sharon!


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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace
5 posted 2009-03-30 10:22 PM


now mother

yes she has your spirit


serenity blaze
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6 posted 2009-03-30 10:42 PM


wimmen? are trouble.



She was pulled out of me, screaming as her little fists clutched my ovaries and..?

Well, she's my joy.

sigh


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7 posted 2009-03-31 01:09 PM


They steal your heart in that first moment... and break it a million times or more through the years. *S*


OwlSA
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8 posted 2009-03-31 02:42 PM


Huggles, Karen.  And echoing, echoing, echoing Ruth . . .

Owl

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9 posted 2009-03-31 10:52 PM


Feel you here, poetfriend.

My seedling finally passed out after a mouthy riot. It's funny how some of her most annoying traits raise such admiration in my chest....

that's my girl.

Dark Angel
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10 posted 2009-04-02 05:13 AM


sighing with you M'lady
Chalmette Guy
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11 posted 2009-04-02 08:51 AM


This is one of my favorites of yours.

And I get this. Totally.

serenity blaze
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12 posted 2009-04-02 03:15 PM


A dingo ate my baby.

sigh

Thanks for the commiseration, all.

I love you folks.

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