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suthern
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0 posted 2009-03-30 01:25 PM


Beauty and wealth are among things I lack
But angels are with me, watching my back
Encamped about me with eyes open wide
When I lose direction, they are my guide
They shelter in storms, keep me from the rain
Wipe away my tears when I am in pain
I’m undeserving, but they still extend
Unconditional love - from sister… friend
They would not use celestial define
But I have no doubt that angels are mine
I often dwell on all the things I lack
But angels are with me, watching my back


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1 posted 2009-03-30 01:27 PM


and, like you're poem, it's reassuring...Hopefully we all have those "angels".....well done gal
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2 posted 2009-03-30 01:33 PM


Aw, sweets... you ARE one! *S* Thank you... and... Happy almost birthday! *G*
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3 posted 2009-03-30 05:31 PM


Yo dear Suthern,

Those angels watching your back are always a comfort.  Now if we could just keep them on the job, and share their time with others.

Love Bobby

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4 posted 2009-03-30 05:47 PM


A heartening poem Suthern.

In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine.
In these narrow rooms no tears are seen, no laughter heard!

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5 posted 2009-03-30 05:50 PM


Well now.

I ain't no angel, but I've definitely got yer back.

(hmmm...maybe even devils have at least one redeeming quality?)

*chuckles and hugs*

MUAH you!

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6 posted 2009-03-30 07:15 PM


Yes, angels are always here for us Ruth! ~ They always watch our backs, and I believe that we all have our own personal guardian angels!

Lovely write Ruth, and I am happy to here that you are aware that angels are near you and protecting you during the tough times!


ARCTIC WIND

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7 posted 2009-03-30 08:30 PM


nice
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8 posted 2009-03-30 08:54 PM



Dear Ruth, what a beautiful poem my friend,

A real delight to read, I think one of your best. Love to you dear lady.

Lindsay

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9 posted 2009-03-30 09:34 PM


I think you are an angel so you would naturally draw them to you.  I loved this one.
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10 posted 2009-03-31 12:58 PM


This wonderful write of Angels warms the heart.
Dear Ruth, you ARE beauty and it permeates and surrounds you, it's enough to look into the mirror and up to the sky and of course you find it too in the smiles of your Angels.

I enjoyed this deeply.

Love,
Margherita


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11 posted 2009-03-31 01:00 PM


a very enjoyable read, well expressed.

have a nice day

yann

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12 posted 2009-03-31 01:03 PM


Bobby: I'd put aside my appreciation for a long time... but I've been blessed too much lately to ignore them... in whatever form they take. *S* Thank you! *S*

Suncleaver: Thank you very much. *S*

serenity: Got it covered, halo or horns: "They would not use celestial define" *G* LOL Many of those most deserving the term are also most hesitant to wear it. *S* Thank you so much, sweet lady... glad you liked! *S*

AW: Whether angels keep my skin intact or not, angels in blue jeans keep watch on my sanity. *S* Thank you so much! *S*

Dark Star: Thank you!

Lindsay: Thank you so very much for those kind words, sir! *S*

Mysteria: Many would argue that assessment. LOL But thank you so much! *S*

Margherita: We must have been typing at the same time! LOL Thank you so very much, dear lady! *S*

yann: I'm so glad you liked... thank you! *S*

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13 posted 2009-03-31 02:46 PM


AND your kitties' backs!  Love the poem, and yes, agree with your readers, you are an angel too!  I am so happy that you are so appreciative.

Owl

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14 posted 2009-04-02 01:54 PM


And I forgot to say, that you most certainly don't lack beauty!

Owl

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15 posted 2009-04-02 03:45 PM


That's really open and sincere, I enjoyed the positive message very much.

Eric

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16 posted 2009-04-02 03:57 PM



Maybe you need to change your nickname,
From your posted picture, I would say you are in good company,
Angels like to hang out with each other, dontchaknow.

Very nice write, Suthern Angel!!

Love, Tracey.

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17 posted 2009-04-02 04:07 PM


like K
i am NO angel
but i too
have your back

Bill Charles
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18 posted 2009-04-02 11:55 PM


suthern - angels are there, and I do like this poem... Nice writing...

BC

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19 posted 2009-04-03 09:21 AM


Owl: Whatever angels protected my kitties are most DEFINITELY appreciated! *S* Those little rascals own my heart. *S* And thank you so much for your kind eyes, my friend... you have the biggest, most beautiful heart! *S*

ethome: Thank you very much, my friend! *S*

WTBAKELAR: I have it on very good authority that I'll never achieve angel status. *G* But thank you so much... you just gave me the biggest smile! *S*

1slick_lady: Like I told her... halos are optional... for me, caring friends ARE angels. *S* Thank you, sweet lady! *S*

BC: I'd lost my beliefs for a while... or hidden them away. *S* But... something or someone shielded me through a night of terror... and many someones have generously given their strength and support since. I am more grateful than I can say... thank you for liking the poor attempt. *S*

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20 posted 2009-04-14 12:13 PM


Ruth,

With every poem of yours that I read, I give thanks that you have returned to share your poetry with those of us here at PiP.  You make me smile and sometimes you make me wipe a tear away - but you never fail to make me feel.

Thank you.
Alison

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21 posted 2009-04-14 08:34 AM


Alison: You truly humble me... And you brighten a day that was already going south rapidly... I think you must be one of those angelic beings I so appreciate. *S*

Thank you so very much!!!

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22 posted 2009-04-14 05:46 PM


"angels are with me, watching my back"

...and that is a good thing!

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23 posted 2009-05-11 08:38 AM


Beloved one, This is superb, and you darling heart are an angel to me. I always believed in Angels, whatever form they take, and YOU and Keth are definitely my special angels. Whenever I am down in the dumps, I just have to recall your smile and I feel better. I THANK HIM for sending you to me. There is always a silver lining to clouds and when that cloud is as dark as the one that dropped over me the silver lining is so much appreciated. YOU beloved one are talented, beautiful and I should be tremendously jealous of you but instead I am just amazed and delighted that you share your jewels of thought with us.
  
Love you always
Forget you never
X x x x x x
Mushy
X x x x x x x x  

Tomorrow is another day I don't know what it holds
but I can face the future with courage brave and bold

Footprints In My Heart
Kethry

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24 posted 2009-05-11 04:05 PM


steavenr and Mushy: Thank you so very much! *S*
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25 posted 2009-05-17 06:53 PM


This is very uplifting, Ruth.
                   Ida

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26 posted 2009-05-19 12:06 PM


Thank you very much, Ida! *S*
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