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Open Poetry #44

The One He Adores

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-03-29 09:44 PM

The One He Adores

Twas another spring like day on
the island of Hawaii known as Oahu.

Butterflys were busy flying
from flower to flower.

Bees were busy polinating
fiona and flora hour upon hour.

The rain was depositing wet kisses
upon mountain, valley, City and beaches.

Strong trade winds upon the Pali were blowing hats
from tourists heads with no one keeping tally.

Surfers were riding rolling waves to shore
upon the beauty of the North Shore.

And James was calling his girlfriend in Chicago
to tell her she's the one he adores.

JamesLee
29March
2009

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-03-29 09:47 PM

Yo James,

There you go kid. I'm sure she will be with you soon.

Bobby

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2009-03-29 09:57 PM

Your poetry is straight from the heart and I adore that particular flair of yours.

Eloise
Senior Member

since 1999-11-27

Posts 1096
Wyoming

3 posted 2009-03-30 12:14 PM

Wonderful images and a sweet thought at the end.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

4 posted 2009-03-30 04:31 AM

quote:
The rain was depositing wet kisses
upon mountain, valley, City and beaches.

Wonderful imagery, dear James! I deeply enjoyed this poem so full of grace and beauty.

Is that a Hawaiian breeze that just caressed my cheeks?

Love,
Margherita

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