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A Little Poem Before Breakfast
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A Little Poem Before Breakfast |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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Written with Ink (title robbed from ctowen) Passing shadows dance on yesterday's snow to herald the end of Marchmadness. Briskly, Arctic Wind pushes winter aside, making way for an incoming Midnite Sun. The rivers eddy and the SEA churns as spring sings the songs of an Earth Angel. These words, written with Ink, long to become poems as winter longs to surrender to summer's late arrival. - Alison [This message has been edited by Alison (03-29-2009 04:05 PM).] |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Very clever, Makes me wish I had a COOL nickname. Good Morning to you, my friend, Love Tracey. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Mornin' Tracey, I think your name is most cool! It deserves a poem all of its own. Hugs for you, A |
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Mysteria
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
Now that was indeed clever! |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
you are precious! |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
This is adorable, clever, and an elegant tribute to friends. Heather |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Oh, no, Not the end of Marchmadness!(smile) I admire your skill, Alison I can't seem to do much of anything before breakfast. Love it. Ida |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a great way to start the day, and good play on names. Enjoyed. Eloise |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
How absolutely lovely and cute, dear Alison. I am smiling at dear Ida's reaction. Dear Ida you keep the March Madness lovingly alive during the whole year. Without a little madness it would be too boring. Hugs. Margherita   |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Adorable, enjoyed. latearrival |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, lovely Mysteria. A - Dixie, Backatcha, girly! xoxox A - Heather, Thank you - they are a special group. Alison - Ida, Ida, Ida! You ain't goin' no place! Love you lots, A - Eloise, Thank you. I have been enjoying your poetry too and will be going back to comment in a bit. Alison - Margherita, I do believe that you are summer's sun. You always bring warmth and light. Love, Alison - late, I had to add you into the poem. I saw your name and it insisted on becoming part of the words. So, there you are - late, but there. xoxoxo A |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Awe! ~ I love this cutie of a poem! Why thank you.....  to youARCTIC WIND |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, AW. It's been fun to play with. A |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alison - very clever write, well done... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
What a delightful poem you wrote before breakfast! "the SEA churns as spring sings the songs of an Earth Angel." Do those spring songs begin with a high C or a high SEA? lol  Adorable poem! Adorable you!  Linda |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
VERY clever! I am especially fond of the idea of: "words .. long(ing) to become poems ... (and) winter long(ing) to surrender to summer... " applause for this 'penning '!! |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL, it's still months away before the real midnight sun appears! Enjoyed this, sorry I didn't see it 'till late afternoon! |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Very clever indeed. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You're too cute... |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very cute poem dear Alison You wrote it well. Love Lindsay |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This was pretty good. I can only imagine how hard it must be to incorporate poet names. And yes, I also need to change my username to something cool now. lol |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
this is nice to recognize poets here a passions Lana |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Yo Ally-son. You da bomb. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Ah, my friend... you put a grin on my face... Loved this "little poem"! *S* |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
poetically clever, thank you for the touching poem. yann |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Alison, this is delightful - and beautiful to boot! Owl |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
This is fantastic, Alison. Yes, summer is indeed late. It got very cold here, and killed all of my flowers. |
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SEA
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
churnin....LOL that's me... this was so cute! |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
cute |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Summers late arrivel is right we don't even have a promise of spring yet here in Idaho We woke up to snow again this morning, your poem gives me hope. Thanks |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
"words, written with Ink, long to become poems as winter longs to surrender to summer's late arrival." ... yes indeed! continuing applause for this 'penning' !! |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
WOW Allison, you did it. Too easy for you. Thanks. I am not on much lately. Some how I am no longer on the internet at work and midnight to 8 a.m. is not the same.LOL I do try to read when not busy at home.The yard has been my big headache since the late freeze we had. I am out side now as soon as I get home. Also having some much needed work done with the house.Just had it painted outside and now for new floors and other inside stuff. love your writig and I see it is becoming a breeze to you lately. good work. late |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
March is over and we are still mad it is April and we woke up to snow again this morning. In Idaho. and that,s no April fools joke. Love the idea, Billie Cullimore |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Alison This si simply delightful! Eric |
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Klassy Lassy Member Elite
since 2005-06-28
Posts 2187Oregon |
LOL... Loved this clever appetizer...all superb image crafters! |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
Ali-girl... you are still writing masterpieces!! This is oh so Ali-delightful! love you lots and sending you RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
To all those wonderful enough to respond to this poem - thank you. I, literally, sat down and wrote this early one morning and had no idea that it would be as well received as it was. You all have given me the greatest, kindest gift with each response - I cherish each of you. Thank you and love, Alison |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
a pleasure to read! much more applause!! |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Well aren't you the clever one. This is fantastic Alison! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Bruce, Thank you for visiting and commenting again. You do know how to make me feel good inside. Sue, I was inspired by the beauty of those around me. Thank you, lovely one. Love to you both, Alison |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
smiling...thinking that I should have a more clever moniker then again, I have had enough problems with the way my name is really spelled without making something up |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Nicely done...James |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Thank you, Steaven and James. A |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Alison, This poem has a very nice touch to it. Love Bobby |
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