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nakdthoughts
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0 posted 2009-03-29 06:37 AM



Heaven's Main Street

It has not been quite five years
Yet I'm always missing her so.
Now thoughts are with another
Who is struck with the same worst foe.

To learn that he now cannot speak
And a tube is his way to eat.
I wonder if she has been calling
to join her in heaven's Main Street.

Who's to say life's to be fair at all
With the loss of a sister, too young.
Now the worry, her husband not well
with a cancer that dwells in his lung.

So I pray once again much too soon.
The losses sometimes overwhelm
"If onlys" are thoughts not enough
As I visit her 'neath the young elm.
M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

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Oklahoma Rose
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1 posted 2009-03-29 06:59 AM


I am so sorry to hear this Maureen. Sending you a warm and comforting .
Margherita
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2 posted 2009-03-29 08:19 AM



I love how you titled this poignant, melancholic poem, dear Maureen.

Yes, too soon to go and hard on those who remain with the deep longing.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

Earth Angel
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3 posted 2009-03-29 09:12 AM


"Heaven's Main Street" can get far too crowded with our loved ones.

I'm sorry to hear of your brother-in-law's struggles. May he ~ and you ~ be surrounded by God's comforting, healing angels.

Love & Light,
Linda

Martie
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4 posted 2009-03-29 11:02 AM


Maureen...
Artic Wind
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5 posted 2009-03-29 11:34 AM


Hopefully everything will be okay ~ You need a warm Maureen


ARCTIC WIND

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2009-03-29 02:39 PM


So sorry, Maureen.
                 Ida

Robert E. Jordan
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7 posted 2009-03-29 03:47 PM


Yo dear M,

Main Streets anywhere, and particularly in heaven, are great.

Love Bobby

Alison
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8 posted 2009-03-29 03:55 PM


Maureen,

I am so sorry to read about your brother-in-law.  Maybe your sister needs him more than he is needed on earth.  I do so hope she is there to meet him when it is his time to go.  In the meantime, I am happy he as friends and family, like you, who love him.

My thoughts are with you as it is hard to let emotions fly free sometimes.  I am here for you always.

Alison

Bill Charles
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9 posted 2009-03-29 04:14 PM


Maureen - I'm sorry to hear what you're going through. Sending my best to you...

BC

LindsayP
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10 posted 2009-03-29 09:42 PM



Dear Maureen, I really feel for you dear

friend in this sad time for you. My sincere sympathy and a big warm hug. love

Lindsay

BluesSerenade
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11 posted 2009-03-29 10:19 PM


Beautiful title, so fitting for a sadly beautiful poem.

warm and caring hugs~

suthern
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12 posted 2009-03-31 10:46 AM


Oh, lady... *sigh* Sometimes it seems the grief will never stop... and smiles are but a distant memory. {{{{{HUGS}}}}}
Dark Star
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13 posted 2009-03-31 10:49 AM


nice written thought
nakdthoughts
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14 posted 2009-03-31 04:47 PM


Thank you for your kind and warm thoughts.
I have been under the weather myself lately and  apologize for not responding much.
Guess age is catching up to me.


M

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