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Fingers playing soul notes
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Fingers playing soul notes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Fingers playing soul notes * No purer water than your river of life will ever cross my forest. With every kiss you carry buckets of milk and honey and pour them over my thirsty valleys and lonely hills. I remember your fingerprints from ages ago, when we were dressed in white innocence on other shores of bliss. Where the stars shone brighter than anywhere else. Deep desire traveled across time and space to manifest once again. Now your eyes flash a secret code into my consciousness. The keynote message pierces my caution and dissolves my shyness. I let my emotions somersault on the lawn of your enchantment and come to a halt right there where you wait for my fingers to touch your soul. Where our oceans flow into each other and where the sun plays with the stitch less seam marking it with diamonds, as a reminder of what this love offers the sky when it is bold enough to express its full potential, no less than divine perfection. * |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Wow, Margherita, This is outstanding writing. Lovely, Enjoyed so much Thanks for sharing your artistry. Love, Tracey. |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Exquisite. You make diamonds appear dull dressing my ears with such finery as this. Heather |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Margherita, This is an interesting picture and poem combination Hon. Love Bobby |
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rad802 Member
since 2008-04-19
Posts 279KY U.S.A. |
Sorry I don't say hello more often. HELLO Rick Delmonico |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
EXCELLENT WRITE!!!! dearest Margherita ~ How wonderful and lovingly your words spread these pages!   ARCTIC WIND |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
 Saved faster that I can say, "divine perfection"!!!!!!!!!!!!  Margherita, I LOVE your poetry and your luminous, loving spirit! God bless you, my friend! His Light shines forth from you!   AT |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Soul notes written with perfection Hope |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - this writing is just amazing, full of romance and thoughts. I truly felt your words... BC |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Margherita, two words for you, serenity and beauty, your poem is delightful and give enchantment. Thanks for the very enjoyable read. yann |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Margherita...lovingly written with your spirit-centered pen. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
No one slse writes love the way you do, Margherita. Simply divine. Ida |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
The beautiful feelings I sense from you, when you write, is the sincerity of you! loved this. late |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You have a wonderful way of expressing your words dear friend, always enjoyable, love Lindsay |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Sending this work of beauty to the top...James |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
You write such lovely poetry, and come up with the prettiest pictures to compliment your thoughts. Always a good message and a pleasure to read. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I let my emotions somersault on the lawn of your enchantment and come to a halt right there where you wait for my fingers to touch your soul. Perfection from your pen... this is magnificent!!! |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
My heart feels joy for all the loving and generous replies and I thank you all, my dear Poet friends! Love, Margherita  |
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angellea Member
since 2009-03-29
Posts 144NC, USA |
True love does exist and can last. This is truly inspiring. ~Maranda |
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Eloise Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096Wyoming |
What a beautiful read. I enjoyed this very much. |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
this is GREAT !!! |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
a beautiful love and nature woven together theme |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar...the finger paint you leave on the soul with your words is indian ink without needles..enjoyed you here |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you, dear Maranda, Eloise, Helen, Michele and DS from my heart. I enjoyed your kind replies very much. Love, margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
No less than divine perfection...James |
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noah j Member
since 2003-03-05
Posts 82on the open road with the wind blowing in my hair |
very well done. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear James, thank you for coming back and thank you dear Noah too for stopping by and leaving a lovely comment. Love, Margherita |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Dear Margherita, this is art with words and a fine art by a master of words. Really beautiful wordplay. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
words like these make me remember why I love the written form...nicely done, especially liked this: "and come to a halt right there where you wait for my fingers to touch your soul." |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Margherita - don't know how I missed this writing, but I did. However, I found it. Beautifully expressed... BC |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Dear Lady, I get the feelng that you may beleave in a life before this one and that you may have loved the one you are talking to in another life. It is so beautiful. Love to you Billie C. |
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