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Yesterday In Today
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Yesterday In Today |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now 
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Bill, very nice poem/picture presentation Gentle, and powerful in one. Well done, much enjoyed Tracey. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi Bill, these are beautiful words with a love message very sensitive, I enjoyed too the photo. yann |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bill, In the first line of the second strophe, do you mean "warmth" or do you mean "warm". It's possible I do not understand that line. Bobby |
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Ariana Senior Member
since 2000-10-08
Posts 571Orlando, Florida |
Bill Beautiful words with a definite calming affect. The picture is great and looks like you took it from a cruiseship. Nicely done. Ariana |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
This is just a wonderful poem! ~ I love the first stanza, it speaks to me. I enjoyed this very much and I LOVE the photo you chose for the background of this poem, if anything, I think this might be your best to date! I don't know, you kinda have lot's of amazing pieces with pictures!   ARCTIC WIND |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You have expressed this captivating thought of "Yesterday in Today" very beautifully, dear Bill. The longing is deeply perceived. The picture contributes intensely to the feelings you convey. Love, Margherita |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
This touched me Bill. There's always a time when I long for yesterday in today. In these lonely halls no moon will weep, no sun will shine. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A man as gentle and loving as you, should never have to experience any sharp edges in your life. ~ Warmth and serenity should be the order of your days ~ and nights.  Giving you a warm hug, dear Poet, Linda  |
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Sharon Rose Member
since 2008-11-03
Posts 51 |
Bill A lovely poem, so deep in feelings that I was your audience as your words flowed. Sharon |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
Bill, I curse my dial-up internet connection when I click on you but it's so worth the wait! |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
A very thought provoking poem Bill Much enjoyed my friend. Take care Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'm afraid I got lost in the picture for a while... my ocean yearn is getting to the cannot-be-ignored point. *S* Such a lovely presentation, Bill... and the tender yearn of your words is fantastic! *S* |
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greytree Junior Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 45Wales |
Such a powerful poem. "in remembrance of times passed in haste" Time may fly whilst having fun but the memories stretch for eons. In such an ugly time, beauty is the real protest |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Lovely thoughts that you share through your mind's eye, Bill. Thank you. A |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Too all - thank you very much for stopping by to read my poetry. It's deeply appreciated. At times I know I don't answer all replies, and I have no excuse. Thanks again... Bill |
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Rose of Sharon Junior Member
since 2008-10-05
Posts 19 |
Bill Enjoyed your poem and picture! |
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