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unboundpoetess
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we were dizzy lust
and low smolder embers
uttering gooseflesh
to jealous the bards
we swore by deep night murmuring
riding rivers of our sighs
gifting perfumed script
to blush the white
of our sheets
you said that you saw angels, too
and I never minded
the climb of you
or the tangle of your vines
lilting warm into your gentle
to pool the oceans
of our eyes

our stars turned corners
and bruised our heels
lingering in strange doorways
once, our circles made us

only who will moan me now
© Copyright 2009 Heather - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 03-27-2009 09:18 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

This is about as poetic as I have ever read sensual. Those metaphorical gems are bursting with fresh ideas of illustration.

Linger, yes, indeed. I did when I read this.

Eric
critical mass
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2 posted 03-27-2009 10:09 PM       View Profile for critical mass   Email critical mass   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for critical mass

Nice


Only who will moan me now.


Wish I had thought of that line.
unboundpoetess
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3 posted 03-28-2009 11:04 AM       View Profile for unboundpoetess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for unboundpoetess

Eric
You blush me humble, thank you.


critical
Thanks for coming over to sit for a spell.
Hope to see you soonly.

Heather
Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now


4 posted 03-28-2009 12:49 PM       View Profile for Bill Charles   Email Bill Charles   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Bill Charles

unboundpoetess - first poem I've read of yours, and I enjoyed it. Love some of the lines and the meaning behind them, nice write...

BC
unboundpoetess
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BC
Appreciate your comment and hope you will come by again.

Thanks,
Heather
Margherita
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Eternity


6 posted 03-28-2009 07:54 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

quote:
riding rivers of our sighs
gifting perfumed script
to blush the white
of our sheets



Your talent gifts us with true gems of poetry. This is very captivating!

It's nice to have you on the blue pages again.

Love,
Margherita
unboundpoetess
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Margherita

Thank you kindly, and I am happy to be back.

Heather
rad802
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8 posted 03-28-2009 09:34 PM       View Profile for rad802   Email rad802   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit rad802's Home Page   View IP for rad802

Hello
I like your work.  

Rick Delmonico

unboundpoetess
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9 posted 03-28-2009 10:44 PM       View Profile for unboundpoetess   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for unboundpoetess

Hi there Rick-
It's always nice to meet a neighbor. I like your work, too.

Heather
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10 posted 03-30-2009 03:00 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this very much... especially the last line! *S*
unboundpoetess
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Suthern

Thank you for your kind comment.

Heather
kindredspirit
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the pictures you create are captivating and seductive.
favorite line:... "we were dizzy lust" pulled me in immediately!
a beautiful poem!
unboundpoetess
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blessings, kindred

and welcome, hope you like it here : )

H
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WOW
wish you would return here on occasion , your work is peerless
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