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unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

0 posted 2009-03-27 09:13 PM

we were dizzy lust
and low smolder embers
uttering gooseflesh
to jealous the bards
we swore by deep night murmuring
riding rivers of our sighs
gifting perfumed script
to blush the white
of our sheets
you said that you saw angels, too
and I never minded
the climb of you
or the tangle of your vines
lilting warm into your gentle
to pool the oceans
of our eyes

our stars turned corners
and bruised our heels
lingering in strange doorways
once, our circles made us

only who will moan me now

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2009-03-27 09:18 PM

This is about as poetic as I have ever read sensual. Those metaphorical gems are bursting with fresh ideas of illustration.

Linger, yes, indeed. I did when I read this.

Eric

critical mass
Member

since 2009-03-25

Posts 275
Michigan

2 posted 2009-03-27 10:09 PM

Nice

Only who will moan me now.

Wish I had thought of that line.

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

3 posted 2009-03-28 11:04 AM

Eric
You blush me humble, thank you.

critical
Thanks for coming over to sit for a spell.
Hope to see you soonly.

Heather

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-03-28 12:49 PM

unboundpoetess - first poem I've read of yours, and I enjoyed it. Love some of the lines and the meaning behind them, nice write...

BC

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

5 posted 2009-03-28 04:15 PM

BC
Appreciate your comment and hope you will come by again.

Thanks,
Heather

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

6 posted 2009-03-28 07:54 PM

quote:
riding rivers of our sighs
gifting perfumed script
to blush the white
of our sheets

Your talent gifts us with true gems of poetry. This is very captivating!

It's nice to have you on the blue pages again.

Love,
Margherita

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

7 posted 2009-03-28 09:00 PM

Margherita

Thank you kindly, and I am happy to be back.

Heather

rad802
Member

since 2008-04-19

Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

8 posted 2009-03-28 09:34 PM

Hello
I like your work.

Rick Delmonico

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

9 posted 2009-03-28 10:44 PM

Hi there Rick-
It's always nice to meet a neighbor. I like your work, too.

Heather

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

10 posted 2009-03-30 03:00 PM

I like this very much... especially the last line! *S*

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

11 posted 2009-03-30 04:48 PM

Suthern

Thank you for your kind comment.

Heather

kindredspirit
Member

since 2009-05-19

Posts 156

12 posted 2009-05-25 05:12 PM

the pictures you create are captivating and seductive.
favorite line:... "we were dizzy lust" pulled me in immediately!
a beautiful poem!

unboundpoetess
Member

since 2008-05-24

Posts 477

13 posted 2009-05-25 07:13 PM

blessings, kindred

and welcome, hope you like it here : )

H

EmmaRose
Senior Member

since 2011-03-02

Posts 1376
Midwest

14 posted 2013-08-01 06:52 PM

WOW
wish you would return here on occasion , your work is peerless

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