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j Tomorrow
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since 2008-08-31
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0 posted 2009-03-27 02:33 AM




To be in harmony is to be in tune with another vibration, relative to one's own.
Each note is a moment of one's life.
When one is out of harmony,
the symphony is merely noise.
To balance oneself,
is to tune one's life like a instrument.
Without equilibrium there is no wave, no vibration, oneself will not be in tune.
The notes of creation will clash and collide causing chaos.
Compassion is life's tuning fork,
and only it can make vibrations perceptible.
When one is fully tuned vibration rings loud,
one will feel the resonance of this symphony.
This resonance is the universe's crescendo,
all will hear and feel its beauty.
Every harmony and rhythm will weave into every moment of existence.

To be enlightened is to compose the symphony of life.

Beautiful Perfection

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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-03-27 09:46 AM


Very insightful and poetically  enlightening!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
2 posted 2009-03-27 11:13 AM


Beautiful ~ and Perfect! This poem is rife with quotable lines!!!

Any poem that has the following words in it, has definitely got my attention! ~ and you put them together in a cohesive and meaningful manner!

~ harmony, in tune, vibration, note, life,
symphony, balance, instrument, equilibrium,  wave, creation, compassion, tuning fork,
resonance, universe's crescendo, beauty, rhythm, existence, enlightened...


EA

Robert E. Jordan
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since 2008-01-25
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Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
3 posted 2009-03-27 01:51 PM


Yo j Tomorrow,

There are very good words in thia poem.  You have the right idea.

Bobby

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Gaia
4 posted 2009-03-27 05:49 PM


A wonderfully musical piece, harmonious and rhythmic.
JamesMichael
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5 posted 2009-03-29 09:26 PM


A pleasure to read...James
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