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WindWalker
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0 posted 2009-03-26 06:10 PM


In the cool dawn of the rain forest
I walk by the sea along a sinewy trail
winding through cedar and arbutus;
the morning sun comes up
over the horizon’s curvature;
waves clap their delight
in rocky crevices deep below
as gulls cry upon the wind.

My mind wanders and I think:
will the people of Earth
ever learn the real nature
of what they call “money”?
Will they come to understand
before it destroys them
and their so pretty planet?

As if the very stones spoke
I hear this thought in my head:
“As long as there is a system
that creates poor and rich
there will always be a currency,
some kind of measure,
by which levels of injustice
may be factored with profitability.
Such is always a necessity
in any unjust society.”

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1 posted 2009-03-26 06:14 PM


"My mind wanders and I think:
will the people of Earth
ever learn the real nature
of what they call “money”?
Will they come to understand
before it destroys them
and their so pretty planet?"

we can hope...

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2009-03-26 06:38 PM


grand-fine imagery:

"In the cool dawn of the rain forest
I walk by the sea along a sinewy trail
winding through cedar and arbutus;
the morning sun comes up
over the horizon’s curvature;
waves clap their delight
in rocky crevices deep below
as gulls cry upon the wind."

... and, a 'spot on' socio-political message!

much applause for this important 'penning'!!

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-03-26 06:56 PM


Enjoyed your thoughts!


ARCTIC WIND

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Gaia
4 posted 2009-03-26 07:03 PM


A keeper for my library.
Thank you for this treasure, WW.

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2009-03-27 11:53 AM


"In the cool dawn of the rain forest
I walk by the sea along a sinewy trail
winding through cedar and arbutus;"

~ There is so much at stake... We must all join forces and keep Mother Earth happy, healthy ~ and enduring! We must heed her warnings!

Your poetry ALWAYS touches me.


EA

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6 posted 2009-03-27 12:01 PM


I have a feeling Mother Earth can take care of herself better than we known and has done so in the past, but of course, I feel that we need to be more responsible and appreciate what we have here before it's too late.
                            Ida

Suncleaver
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Stafford England
7 posted 2009-03-27 12:54 PM


A very important write.

But you have to remember that Mother Earth has withstood fire, comets, ice, poisonous atmospheres, floods, solar flares, plasma and ion storms, drought, volcanoes and earthquakes.

In his greed the only thing mankind will succeed in destroying is himself.

A chorus of agony from heaven and rain poured in a colossus of angel's tears.

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