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Robert E. Jordan
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0 posted 2009-03-26 03:07 PM


Bones has the mouthful
of bad, jagged teeth.  
They’re all rotten
and snaggletooth.  

If his clients were
after kissing him,
or smelling his breath,
he’d starve to death.  

Bobby

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Artic Wind
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1 posted 2009-03-26 03:28 PM


oh um, that's not good lol ~ Dental health is important, right?


ARCTIC WIND

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2 posted 2009-03-26 03:39 PM


Poor Bones!
2islander2
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3 posted 2009-03-26 03:45 PM


God has created beautiful beeings but surely he missed the teeth, or is it candies ?

thanks for the intriguing poem.

yann

Robert E. Jordan
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4 posted 2009-03-26 04:58 PM


Thanks Artic Wind,

You're absolutely right.  I'll inform Bones.

Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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5 posted 2009-03-26 05:00 PM


Thanks dear Kacy,

For your concern for Bones.

Love Bobby

Robert E. Jordan
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6 posted 2009-03-26 05:01 PM


Thanks Yann,

Yeah, that must be it.  Too much candy and rich living in general.  That's Bones for you.

Bobby

[This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (03-26-2009 05:35 PM).]

ethome
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7 posted 2009-03-26 07:04 PM


LOL! Bobby you are quite a character.
Yes, he would starve to death.......But there would be some clients.

Eric

Robert E. Jordan
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8 posted 2009-03-26 07:13 PM


Thanks Eric,

Yes, a client can always find Bones, and Bones can always find a client.

Bobby

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9 posted 2009-03-29 01:11 AM


It's sad but dental care is often indicative of income levels.  We often can't afford what we need.  You wrote this well, Bobby.  I have a picture of those who paid to use Bones - and how sad that his breath was a non issue to them.

You write poems about life on so many levels.

Alison

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