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greytree
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since 2009-02-24
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Wales

0 posted 2009-03-26 05:10 AM





Maybe not the best of couples,
trying to solve our many troubles,
with a simple kiss and cuddle,
but just always in a muddle,
from the trouble we caused.

We never paused to imagine,
how great our lives they could have been,
enjoying the things nobody'd seen,
Well I believe,
with all the chaos and anamosity,
we cherished our hypocrisy,
and were never going to stop you see?

But to miss it?
all the fighting and the feuding,
where we were always losing,
patience,
with each other and our selves
we created our own hell
so why do i miss your smell.

Regardless.  
The end came in sight
and was met with no delight,
It just didnt feel right,
but inevitably,
when other people could see,
we were never meant to be,
you shouldn't be the girl,
for me.

In such an ugly time, beauty is the real protest

© Copyright 2009 Peter - All Rights Reserved
suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
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Louisiana
1 posted 2009-03-26 11:39 AM


so why do i miss your smell.

It's the little things that linger... even through conflaguration endings. *S*

Welcome to Passions!!

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-03-26 02:25 PM


Welcome Peter,

Enjoyed your penning, hope to read more
from you.

~ARH

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Gaia
3 posted 2009-03-26 02:50 PM


ouch...
Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
4 posted 2009-03-26 03:26 PM




WELCOME TO PIP


ARCTIC WIND

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