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Lunar Plight |
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Fizzle Junior Member
since 2009-03-21
Posts 38 |
In the full moon's time, In the dead of night, a lone wolf draws nigh, howling a mournful plight Its howl speaks of cold rain and sad stories of yesterday It speaks of numbing pain and joys that never stayed Its eyes, wide pools of tears tell the tale of lonely years Its weakened body, limping along a tell-tale sign of things gone wrong. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Its howl speaks of cold rain and sad stories of yesterday It speaks of numbing pain and joys that never stayed" beautifully sad...  I like this very much |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Poignant poetry. "It speaks of numbing pain and joys that never stayed" As an empathic, I feel the wolf's pain, can hear the mournful howl. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Love this sad plight from the wolf's point of view, Fizzle. Ida |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
I'd enjoy this any time... but since I'm currently reading a book about wolves, it's particularly poignant. Well done! |
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