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True Believer |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
God, I know your there. I know you have a plan for me! I wait these long hours for you lord. I can tell your words to others. I am a true believer! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Dark Star, This has the right idea. In your first line, that should be "you're" instead of "your". "you're" is the contraction for "you are", while "your" is the possessive of "you". Love Bobby |
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Dark Star Member
since 2008-02-20
Posts 392Lost in your eyes |
ah, i see, thnx |
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