Open Poetry #44 |
I Had Dreamed I Died (Senryu) |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I left my body, I await you in my dreams, It's been so long now... Out of reach, out of sight |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
ah Luke, I know what this is like nicely done and great picture |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Suncleaver, This is an excellent Senryu. I like it loads. Well done! Bobby |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Dream time is my favorite time I shall meet you there... lovely Picture... more lovely is the heart, from which these words came.... ~Love ~ARH |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Oh, wow... liked this very much!! |
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