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Order Our Souls
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Order Our Souls |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
Order our souls, self discipline, Others tell us just how it’s done, Practice, the heart of behavior, A virtue we always savor. Do we see us as that, someone, Lacking this grace? Balance be none? And letting our shortcomings run Away too often? So, better Order our souls! Ah, easier said than begun, Correcting ourselves is no fun, Of course we all want the matter Known only to us, as favor We promise to, sure as the Sun, Order our souls! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Self discipline is hard, but not impossible, but I understand what you are saying~ ~ARH |
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Osprey Member
since 2009-04-12
Posts 249 |
I'm promising no such thing, but I was drawn to your poem. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Bloodline, Don’t worry excessively about ordering your soul or mine. Things play out the way they will. Bobby |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Self-discipline isn't always easy. |
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Kaoru
since 2003-06-07
Posts 3892where the wild flowers grow |
"Correcting ourselves is no fun," Admitting when you're wrong is probably the worst, but it's a necessary ingredient in living. Ah, enjoyed your work. |
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Bloodline Member
since 2009-05-23
Posts 236Oklahoma |
A Romantic Heart, Oh just rambling, thank you for your read and comment, Osprey, I agree, thanks for stopping by, Robert E. Jordan, no worries, just following a muse of the moment, Oklahoma Rose, your right of course, thank you for those words, yes, easy does it, Kaoru, always fun to see your comments many thanks, maybe we are too hard on ourselves, all in good time, Bloodline |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yep, I am a self-starter - now if I could only be a self-finisher! I love this one, BL A |
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