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Open Poetry #44

Heartless-can-be?

A Beautiful Disaster
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since 2007-01-13

Posts 409

0 posted 2009-03-23 04:20 PM

I'm wild and sometimes even heartless-can-be,
I'm fond of collecting illusions to ruin,
I'm breaking the rules life has written for me,
"Create to destroy" best describes what I'm doing.
I'm scarily dangerous, silently loud -
A walking disaster you'd better ignore,
The pain in the neck of a desperate crowd.
But I'm like a magnet - you'll only want more.

You'll figure me out, you'll get to the core -
One beauty, two fears, three dangers - it's me.
You'll enter my heartspace and close the door
For anyone else who I wanted to be.
My truth was denying devotion and faith,
And now you've proved right the opposite true.
A chain of mistakes is the sign of my days;
My strength will forgive me - it led me to you.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

1 posted 2009-03-23 04:23 PM

An interesting and thought provoking write, that's for sure.
Leaves the reader wanting to know more, which I think is a good thing here.

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