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Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
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Lost in your eyes

0 posted 2009-03-23 03:16 PM



Even if your gone,
your love still
lingers deep into me.

Even if you
have gone to a
better place
your love lingers
like a never ending
echoes

Lana
XOXOXO

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Chalmette Guy
Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
1 posted 2009-03-23 03:59 PM


I've always loved the term 'love lingers'.
Beautiful.

I do want to ask if you meant for the last line 'echoes' to be plural like that or not?

Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
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Lost in your eyes
2 posted 2009-03-23 04:48 PM


i meant it like that, thnx for the curiosity i guess lol thnx

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
3 posted 2009-03-24 04:36 PM


Enjoyed the Write!


ARCTIC WIND

Dark Star
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Lost in your eyes
4 posted 2009-03-24 04:42 PM


thnx

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