Seeding the Tomb (written with CTOWEN)

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inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

0 posted 2009-03-23 10:25 AM

Autumn left
with the heart,interrupted

such fires (in forest?)
burning to thought

embers to remember
(casualties?)

a summer's feast
about to be spoiled

a whispered raise
of a broken bed

off echos of winds, terse
twisted and preyed,
ravaging lands of plenty
where corn climbed
on its vine,diminished
by plowed over fields

harvested once upon
visited and prayed

Autumn stumbles
stalking the inevitable

on stones of red silence
the burgeonging girth, empties
to a brown gutted womb
famine's birth seeding the tomb

sent to release
Heaven's broken sky,
filled by caskets of rain
in clouds to collapse

drowning plentiful ..

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

1 posted 2009-03-23 10:47 AM

My word, you two sure come up with some mighty fine collaborations! ~ and this is no exception! Powerful images! Uniquely descriptive!

"sent to release
Heaven's broken sky,
filled by caskets of rain
in clouds to collapse

drowning plentiful .."

~ A deluge can be too much of a good thing!

Great writing!

Linda

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-03-23 10:55 AM

I almost highlighted the same passage that EA did... that's a powerful ending! *S*

Great duet... I enjoyed! *S*

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

3 posted 2009-03-23 11:38 AM

What a wonderful duet! ~ Enjoyed this deeply

ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

4 posted 2009-03-23 06:15 PM

inkedgoddess - enjoyed this one... Where's your photo...

BC

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

5 posted 2009-03-24 03:16 PM

Thanks everyone, once again Ink's mystic blends took this to a higher place!

You can look forward to more of the same, as long as Mish can tender my words I shall do the same. : )

In rhythms to a rise the days shall follow ... each Yesterday, each Tomorrow. - Ct/05

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

6 posted 2009-03-24 03:28 PM

wow, what a fantastic collaboration!

love it!

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

7 posted 2009-03-25 01:04 AM

Oh you guys duet it so well!!!
The magical mystery made for the perfect intrigue and calming effect.

Wonderful talent you two.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

8 posted 2009-03-25 01:35 AM

Intense.

I enjoyed this read.

Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand.

inkedgoddess
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-11-19

Posts 7392
Ohio

9 posted 2009-03-25 07:13 AM

thanks a bunch
it's on Natural Faith that Craig and I
surrender to when we do it (duet that is)

ctowen
Member Elite

since 2001-10-18

Posts 2286
Green Mountains of VT

10 posted 2009-03-25 03:14 PM

I am very taken to hear from you, BlueS ...
I always look forward to your viewing eyes!

and thanks everyone for the uplifting comments.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

11 posted 2009-03-25 06:54 PM

Nice...James

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