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Huan Yi
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0 posted 2009-03-22 09:15 PM


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Ah wonderful

Even young
Blue eyed blond
And beautiful
Is not forever
Perhaps that’s something
You understand

The sun is setting
On another day
We will never see again

Come outside
And hold my hand


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Margherita
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Eternity
1 posted 2009-03-23 04:39 AM


Beautiful! In holding hands we can go on with much more serenity, bearing the melancholy together.

Love,
Margherita

passing shadows
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displaced
2 posted 2009-03-24 11:26 AM


sadly, I do understand


Marchmadness
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3 posted 2009-03-26 11:25 AM


Most people don't appreciate youth until we look back on it.    
                                  Ida

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4 posted 2009-03-26 11:58 AM


The sun is setting
On another day
We will never see again

Come outside
And hold my hand

I love this! *S* Growing old together and loving as you age... a special kind of beauty. *S*

2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2009-03-26 02:37 PM


Thank you for sharing this intimate piece with brio.

applause

yann

Artic Wind
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Realm of Supernatural
6 posted 2009-03-26 03:20 PM


Enjoyed this Huan Yi!


ARCTIC WIND

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