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tao power
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0 posted 2009-03-20 01:38 AM


With eyes as green as verdant spring
and lips as pink as dawn
your face completes my perfect day
when kissed by morning sun.

The heart of your eye, like velvet
your skin, december white
I settle into the curve of you
and admire perfect night.



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Gaia
1 posted 2009-03-20 04:59 PM


Very very nicely done!
unboundpoetess
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2 posted 2009-03-20 05:38 PM


Such sweetness here!
Adored this,
H

Artic Wind
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3 posted 2009-03-20 06:28 PM


It flowed really well ~ Nicely written


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