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Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11
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0 posted 2009-03-19 08:42 AM


Sending thoughts across time and space
Touching through a mental caress
Hands clasped and fingers interlaced
She knows my mind the best

Together if doomed to be ever apart
Yielding to reserved yet warm fire
Touching even this cold dead heart
Defrosting with unrelenting desire

Under blankets of suppression
Feeling me somehow where she is
Taking off the layers of repression
Feeling the trace of ghostly lips

Feeding on her as she gives me words
Thoughts become thus the beautiful deed
I cannot see anything but the sound I heard
Whence she whispered in my ear the seed

Without restraint I give myself in full
She soars and wisps through my mind
My muse, my soul each to the other pulls
As she whispers we become intertwined


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1 posted 2009-03-19 08:47 AM


then I would say your muse is one lucky lady

Good morning JML

Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 2009-03-19 08:55 AM


Good morning SEA. Thank you.
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
3 posted 2009-03-19 09:39 AM


Without restraint I give myself in full
She soars and wisps through my mind
My muse, my soul each to the other pulls
As she whispers we become intertwined....


What a gift! to have all of you...

~Warm hugs
ARH

Earth Angel
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since 2002-08-27
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-03-19 10:59 AM


You and your muse make beautiful music together! ~ and I love the lyrics! lol

Here's a hug for each of you!


EA

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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Realm of Supernatural
5 posted 2009-03-19 11:24 AM


It seems to be that you and your Muse work well together to create beauty on these pages of elegant blue


ARCTIC WIND

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
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by the sea
6 posted 2009-03-19 12:24 PM


Hi Guy, may be muse and love intertwine too, thank you for the touching poem.

yann

Earl Brinkman
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Osaka, Japan
7 posted 2010-03-06 07:29 AM


There is some rich writing in this piece.  Bravo!
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