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My Muse Intertwines

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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 03-19-2009 08:42 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Chalmette Guy

Sending thoughts across time and space
Touching through a mental caress
Hands clasped and fingers interlaced
She knows my mind the best

Together if doomed to be ever apart
Yielding to reserved yet warm fire
Touching even this cold dead heart
Defrosting with unrelenting desire

Under blankets of suppression
Feeling me somehow where she is
Taking off the layers of repression
Feeling the trace of ghostly lips

Feeding on her as she gives me words
Thoughts become thus the beautiful deed
I cannot see anything but the sound I heard
Whence she whispered in my ear the seed

Without restraint I give myself in full
She soars and wisps through my mind
My muse, my soul each to the other pulls
As she whispers we become intertwined

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with you


1 posted 03-19-2009 08:47 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

then I would say your muse is one lucky lady

Good morning JML
Chalmette Guy
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2 posted 03-19-2009 08:55 AM       View Profile for Chalmette Guy   Email Chalmette Guy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Chalmette Guy

Good morning SEA. Thank you.
A Romantic Heart
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3 posted 03-19-2009 09:39 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Without restraint I give myself in full
She soars and wisps through my mind
My muse, my soul each to the other pulls
As she whispers we become intertwined....


What a gift! to have all of you...

~Warm hugs
ARH
Earth Angel
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4 posted 03-19-2009 10:59 AM       View Profile for Earth Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Earth Angel's Home Page   View IP for Earth Angel

You and your muse make beautiful music together! ~ and I love the lyrics! lol

Here's a hug for each of you!


EA
Artic Wind
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5 posted 03-19-2009 11:24 AM       View Profile for Artic Wind   Email Artic Wind   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Artic Wind

It seems to be that you and your Muse work well together to create beauty on these pages of elegant blue


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2islander2
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6 posted 03-19-2009 12:24 PM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

Hi Guy, may be muse and love intertwine too, thank you for the touching poem.

yann
Earl Brinkman
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7 posted 03-06-2010 07:29 AM       View Profile for Earl Brinkman   Email Earl Brinkman   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Earl Brinkman

There is some rich writing in this piece.  Bravo!
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