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Huan Yi
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since 2004-10-12
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Waukegan

0 posted 2009-03-18 10:36 AM


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Who is it
Moving
At the edge
Of thought

In shadows
Your mind incapable
As always too focused
On usual scenes

How silently
Whoever it is
Drifts like mist
Hardly perceptible
Out of a corner
Of the invisible eye

Or perhaps
It’s no more then
Than the moon again

Playing tricks
To the end
With that
Adorable one

The heart within
Has never learned
You can not have


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nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
1 posted 2009-03-19 06:12 AM


"Playing tricks
To the end...

The heart within
Has never learned
You can not have"
enjoyed~~
M


Midnitesun
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since 2001-05-18
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Gaia
2 posted 2009-03-19 11:59 AM


Loved this corner-eye glance.
Dark Star
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since 2008-02-20
Posts 392
Lost in your eyes
3 posted 2009-03-19 12:13 PM


nice thoughts

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