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wells of morning |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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sometimes we would lean into the wells of morning pressed together like fingers into the blue that was still black in places from the night as if we were worshiping some invisible god there or each other jack and jilling our imagination like it was smoe hill we needed to be on top of to see where we had been walking our love shoes and how their footprints seemed to know the way even though we struggled and pretended we didn't I would spend time naming your freckles and pores and you said I should sleep more for later on when I would need all my strength to keep you quiet as if either one of us really wanted you that way ______________ daark (viscosity) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"when I would need all my strength to keep you quiet"  loved that line....good morning D!  |
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pretty1 Junior Member
since 2009-03-13
Posts 22 |
sometimes we would lean into the wells of morning pressed together - This was great! It made one want to read and want more and you captured that with the rest of the poem. Thanks for sharing Dark Stranger! Pretty1 |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suesea, thanks babe..no plans for quiet conversation eh? _________________ ms pretty1, I do imagine it to be like entering some forbidden love place through a hidden doorway at the top of the stairs..thank you for the whisper |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Really agree with everyone! ~ Lovely stuff  ARCTIC WIND |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
AW, thanks amigo...I appreciate your reads |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
"jack and jilling our imagination" Very creative phrase. Cool stuff. |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
CG...thanks guy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quote: You make for some happy mornings... afternoons... evenings.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms sun, thank you special lady friend...you smile me often |
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unboundpoetess Member
since 2008-05-24
Posts 477 |
Makes me crave my husband. TY, H |
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1slick_lady Member Ascendant
since 2000-12-22
Posts 6088standing on a shadow's lace |
"I would spend time naming your freckles" now that sounds like fun |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
UBP, thanks lady friend... __________ ms slick..I think so too...bring em on over? thanks babe |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Your wells of morning sound really enchanting ... you take your time and that's a main ingredient of love's success. Love, Margherita |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar..time is all we have to spend, thanks lady |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
and you said I should sleep more for later on when I would need all my strength to keep you quiet as if either one of us really wanted you that way LOL... there are things to be said for silence... there are things to be said for... not. *G* Loved this! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thanks babe! |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, A pen would be nice - to write secret messages in the most intimate places. I am spending today reading your poetry. It's a bright, daark Sunday. A |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san...thank you for the sun smile babe |
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